Do this sound like 100 word essay? 20 point?

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Luz Almont

My daughter away tells that she Always want to become a dance when she grow up but she keep changing her idea every time. I am very glad of her doing that, I just know that she is trying to find her way to the further little by little and she will get there. I also i know that she will have great further. I know now that she just a kids but she will grow up fast because times fly away fast.
When daughter first started school she told me that she want to be a dancer when she grow. Every time when she got invited to party there was always a dance contest and the girls that dance better will win 10 dollar. She was always the better dancer than other girl also she won 10 doctor for being the best Dancer. She also sing up for the school dance shows and she won medal for being a School Star performer.
During two month, she told that she change her mind and want to be an artist. Every time she is bored she draw something and come out beautiful. when she don`t have money to buy gift for mother day ,if is necessary she draw me a hearts ,flowers and the families. Her art teacher is very express withe her art work that give her 90 % on her report card.I buy her all the art thing she need to become a great artist.
When she turn 5 year old she told me, mom forget all about the artist. I want to become a
babysitter when i grow up. A that time i became a babysitter also i shows all the thing that she need to knows. fore example i shows her how to change the babies damper and how to give them a bath. My daughter was a fast learner because she learns how to feed the babies food and how to put them to sleep with out me teaching her.
On her 6th birthday she told that that she want to become a teacher. She write 2 essay every day. she started to read 4 book in one day. also she sometime read book to the babies. she dose all her h.w in 30 minute then she do extra h.w to get a better grade. She pass all her test with 80% or 90%. my daughter got on the principal honor roll for get the High grade in the report card that was 95%. Also she had never fell a grade because she always play attention to the teachers.
3 later she told me that she want to be an author. she already s wrote 3 book , the first book that she wrote it was about two twin. The second book she wrote is a poem book. The third poem she wrote is was about growing plant. But i never got to read because she loss it. Now she go to the library every weeks. My daughter is a speeding reader, she read 8 to 10 book every week. she love to write book and to read it. she have more Fun writing books then reading it.
if this don`t sound like a 100 world essay but if it sound like an essay just leave or if do not sound like and essay fix the mistake and make it sound like and essay., some thing you need to know this is not a home work, i am just taking a head start on the 11 grade. it will be nice if you people help me fix this essay also it will help if you try to retypes. you can change some little thing that make the essay sound boring and to something that it express the readers. also retype it the same order that i have it.
please answer this question as soon and fast as possible. hint i am a I.E.P student and i always have difficult time writhing an essay i have like 5 hour writhing this essay. the one that help me will not get 20 point for best answer, you will get 40 pint for best answer because they are double point for every answer questions

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Yes it does. You actually have 24 words in your first sentence. You can see from that you are well and truly over the 100 words that you need.

13th birthday present ideas? ?

It is my best friends 13tyh birthday in a couple weeks and i have got her an ed sheeran poster and a big glass frame with loads of pictures of me and her in it but i am stuck on what else to get her! ! She loves music and doesnt have her ears peirced and i always get her jewlery and she has loads of makeup! What shall i get her? ?

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Items which represent good luck are some of the best gift ideas for 13 and 14 year old girls.

Dogeared "Make a Wish'' "...
Sterling Silver Wishbone...
Dogeared Make A Wish "In...
Sterling Silver Wish Bone...
Sterling Silver Wish Bone...
One of the best gifts for a 13 or 14 year old girl is a good luck charm bracelet.

Real Irish Four Leaf Clover, Symbol of Good Luck, Clover and Round Charm Bracelet for Women
Amazon Price: $19.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
It is the thought that counts and this sweet good luck bracelet lets her know that you are wishing her the best of luck. It's a wonderful gift to give.
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A dream catcher to filter out any bad dreams which may want to invade her sleep

DreamCatcher ~ Purple Dre...
DreamCatcher ~ Blue Dream...
Southwestern Dreamcatcher...
Aqua Dream Catcher Navel...
Dreamcatcher Double Ring...
A heart shaped computer USB flash storage drive necklace...

Crystal Diamond Heart Shape Jewelry USB Flash Drive with Necklace:8GB(Pink)
Amazon Price: $17.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
It's a computer storage drive that is absolutely beyond charming. This beautiful crystal adorned heart external USB flash drive provides an amazing 8GB of computer storage. What a beautiful way to say I love you.
An electronic item is a great gift for a teenage girl...

Apple iPod touch 8 GB 4th Generation (White)
Amazon Price: $187.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Dell Inspiron 14" i14RN-1364DBK Laptop with Inter Core i3-2330M 2.2Ghz, 4GB DDR3 Memory, 640GB Hard drive, Wifi-N, BlueTooth, USB 3.0, Windows 7 Home Premium
Amazon Price: $629.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Dell D620 Laptop Duo Core with Windows XP
Amazon Price: $155.00 (as of 02/25/2012)
Usually ships in 1-2 business days

3 Pack of Universal Touch Screen Stylus Pen (Red + Black + Silver)
Amazon Price: $0.01 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Toshiba Satellite L755-S5169 15.6 -Inch Laptop (Silver)
Amazon Price: $549.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
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iPod is a great gift idea for a teenage girl...

Apple iPod touch 8GB (4th Generation) - Black - Current Version
Amazon Price: $188.00 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Apple iPod classic 160 GB Black (7th Generation) NEWEST MODEL
Amazon Price: $229.00 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Apple iPod touch 8 GB 4th Generation (White)
Amazon Price: $187.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Apple iPod touch 32GB (4th Generation) - Black - Current Version
Amazon Price: $272.95 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Apple iPod nano 8 GB Graphite (6th Generation - current version)
Amazon Price: $119.99 (as of 02/25/2012)
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Lotions, glosses, and fragrance gift ideas...

Lotions, glosses, and fragrances are great gift ideas for a teenage girl. She is just beginning to play around in all the wonderful new lotions, powders, glittery nail glosses, and scented body potions that come along with being a woman. This means that this is one of the best gifts which you can purchase for a 13 or 14 year old girl.

As she does not as of yet have her favorite cosmetic choices picked out yet, purchasing gifts that consist of small tubes and vials of these items will give her the opportunity to dabble in a variety of colors, and scents. Almost always in the company of her best friends, they spend time together experimenting with cosmetic colors, brands, and techniques. These multi pack gifts are perfect for their slumber parties and after school visits.

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